Caper Knife
Is this a decent poem?
Reaper
By the Sage of Youth
I’m the bullet tearing through your flesh.
I’m the knife embedded in your chest.
I’m the arrow rushing to greet you.
I’m the ground flying up to meet you.
I’m the poison floating in your soup.
I’m the assassin waiting on your stoop.
I’m the creature’s piercing bite.
I’m the thwart of human might.
I’m the bomb strapped to your gut.
I’m the virus in your blood.
I’m the caper of the night.
I’m the thief of inner light.
I’m the water in your lungs.
I’m the burning fire of a thousand suns.
I am slow, I am painful.
I am swift, I am careful.
I am grief, I am dread.
I am the murderer of all who lie dead.
I am Death.
yes, very good actually. much creativity in there, and a couple ways of thinking about death i hadn’t before, the thief of inner light being my personal favorite. if you want a new spin on the poem, see how it sounds without putting “I’m” at all after the first line. the “I’m” is implied anyway, and english abhors redundancy; plus the rhyme scheme will be terse and tighter compacting the meanings more tightly, and spinning your reader into the nature of death more quickly and voraciously. maybe keep the “I am”s though; that really works to make us focus again at the end. Very good poem either way though, keep posting!
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